10/9/2005 c29 3miss-blackhair
it got me laughing at some parts. real nice. =)

10/9/2005 c28 2Hug a Tree
i like it and thanku for bringing andrew back into the story!i really want to find out exactly why andrew hit nick!

10/9/2005 c3 That'sNotMe
All gushing about Andrew aside (I have to say that Vicks here has a little crush, whether or not he's intended as the hero) I must comment on Izzy. She is the blonde, blue-eyed clone of my cousin's brunette, black-eyed best friend. She's very real, in the manner of unrealistic people. Fabulous, I love it!

*~Vicky*~

10/9/2005 c26 jdfhnjd
"I cannot just “accept” that some people think my character is an idiot when she isn’t."

You wrote a whole statement with conviction but blew it with the sentence above. You seem to have missed the point. 'Idiot', 'dipshit', are the terms which I've used to describe Ana. Obviously, it's MY OPINION, because that's how I percieved her to be through her actions. She does something that may seem logical to you but that thing may happen to warrant as a action done by an idiot to me. By telling me, 'NO she isn't' isn't going to wade my opinion of her. What I find hard to believe is that you are extremely adamant in refusing to accept the idea that some people may not think the way you do. In every one of my reviews where i've expressed my dislike for ana, I've EXPLICITLY stated that it was MY OPINION, but then in every subsequent chapter, you put up an author's note calling me 'immature' or 'i don't like you'. Do you see why I think that that display is immature? Because you thought it appropriate to attack me personally for something that I thought of your character. I have never went on a tangent to malign YOU or your WRITING, but you sought it fit to prescribe some of your banter towards me.

Perphaps I've instigated the whole thing, but that's because I've done it before to alot of stories I've read but never has the writer taken it personally as you have.

We've already agreed to disagree.

"I’ve only responded to your accusations that my character is a skank, dickhead, and dipshit"

They are not accusations, BTW. I have, on a multitude of times EXPLICITLY stated that it was my opinion. Obviously different scenarios are subject to different interpretations so please don't take my words out of context.

"By the way, if you think my character is so stupid, why are you still reading this?"

Again, you failed to even read the point of my review(s). I've said a number of times that I felt your story was well written and an asshat for a main character isn't nessessarily synonymous to a crappy story. However, for your information, I thought the plot went abit sour after about chapter 20 so that is when I discontinued reading it, ony reviewing in response to you calling me 'immature' and the likes. I would have written a review on the actual story but I felt that you would disregard it as you have shown previously, so I thought, 'why bother.'

With that said, If you feel inclined to respond to this review, then please do so, however, I'll just like to let you know that I won't be so dedicated as to check back here anymore so I won't read it, so I wouldn't waste my time.

10/9/2005 c27 Myrrh
no...not ana and nick back together...that can't be...where's andrew? update soon...keep up the good work!

10/8/2005 c26 Emilea
aww. thats so sad.. 'enjoying your coffee? hahaha. sweet.

10/8/2005 c27 1tournesols
The giggle at the end of the chapter is extremely creepy, but still funny... but more creepy. -shivers-