for All is Fair in Love and War10/1/2005 c1 
38TheLiving Dead123
Wow...good story. You have a very fluent way of conveying what you want. "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK" :) Hey it works. Reminded me a bit of Catcher in The Rye by J.D. Salinger, but it was certainly not a work of plagiarism. Update!
38TheLiving Dead123Wow...good story. You have a very fluent way of conveying what you want. "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK" :) Hey it works. Reminded me a bit of Catcher in The Rye by J.D. Salinger, but it was certainly not a work of plagiarism. Update!
10/1/2005 c1 2Billthegeek
This is one of the best short story I've ever read here. Your writing style is amazing. I was totally engrossed despite the rather huge chunks of words per paragraph. Write more.
2BillthegeekThis is one of the best short story I've ever read here. Your writing style is amazing. I was totally engrossed despite the rather huge chunks of words per paragraph. Write more.
9/30/2005 c1 heystarshine
It definitely sounds interesting enough. I'd suggest upping the rating to around T though. With the language, K doesn't really fly all that well. Good start though and I'll check back for more.
It definitely sounds interesting enough. I'd suggest upping the rating to around T though. With the language, K doesn't really fly all that well. Good start though and I'll check back for more.