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4/15/2006 c1 12Sunset Teardrops
You seem to portray the eye of a perfectionist here, and that is good since many (writers) may be able to relate. Your intense words make the poem memorable.
4/10/2006 c1 124Tipped
I like the modern feel with the harsh "d" sounds repeating. "heaps of refuse"- nice. "passageways of filth"- even better. i love your use of the word 'clogs.' dunno why

good job ^_^
11/25/2005 c1 5water lorelei
Wow! This is so vivid! I love graphic/vivid poetry. This is so... real! I'm dazzled/shocked at the same time. It's sad, truthful and such a grasping truth for the fear of failure all around the world. This is so serious and flawless, I loved it! On my favs!

Why not I just add YOU to my favorites? Hm... there's a good idea! *silent darkness*
10/4/2005 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
Oh wow. That was an incredible pome that left me with an undescibable feeling. This is such a different way of portraying death. Amazing job it really was an amazing job.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

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