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1/11/2006 c1 18Plinky
Interesting piece - made me think. Nice imagery. Keep writing!
1/6/2006 c1 53diesoz
very metaphorical, very...very...something, something good, but I don't know the word for it.
12/28/2005 c1 23La Gitane
Very nicely done... I love the loose freedom in this - as if there are random letters and punctuation marks flying around in a moment. Actually 'punctuation shrugged off' is a lovely line.

You seemed to abandon the writing theme half way through the poem, however, which gave it a slightly disjoined feel.

But still, a great poem with good imagery.
11/28/2005 c1 61renru-no-ren
0.0 okay then.
11/18/2005 c1 Roman Emperor
maybe its becuase im a guy and have a tendency to think of the perverse, but this i see is a very sensual and becomes a very sexual poem. THis is really awesome. Kudos.
11/9/2005 c1 deletemyaccount2012
Beautifully written. I especially enjoyed the opening lines.
10/7/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
awesome.. very powerful.. I love that last line
10/3/2005 c1 89rira-chan
great poem! loved it! thanks for your reveiw btw and yes i did mean worthless in my poem...i can't spell so...that's my excuse...^^...keep up the great work kay! ^-^

~rira-chan~
10/1/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
I love this. Beautifully written. Amazing imagery and passion. Great peice, keep up the great work!
10/1/2005 c1 18Fleabitten McNasty
I don't really get it but I like the part about peeling off his skin. Probably just too deep for my shallow mind. ;)

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