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1TimeyWimeyBadWolf
Lovely job on this story! Heartbreakingly tragic and beautifully happy. Amazing writing.
1TimeyWimeyBadWolfLovely job on this story! Heartbreakingly tragic and beautifully happy. Amazing writing.
9/30/2011 c14 redandwhitetigers
That is such a sweet story. i luv it. It is the perfect sad love story.
Read it. Luv it. Review it. :D
That is such a sweet story. i luv it. It is the perfect sad love story.
Read it. Luv it. Review it. :D
9/2/2011 c14 3Vanilla Sonne
Hello there! I just discovered and read your story and I need to say a few things. First, you are a seriously amazing writer. Yes, the story was not filled with extravagant words and detailed descriptions, but it did not make it bad at all. I love, love, love how with just a few words I can still capture the darkness of the story. The vagueness of each paragraph was perfect.
Secondly, I love Fear. His femininity is adorable and the fact that he seemed so simple yet there is something really dark about him is really beautiful.
Thirdly, I adore the fluff. :D I am a touchy-feely kind of person too and I find Fay just so darn cute.
Well that is all, I guess.
A big fan,
VanillaSonne
3Vanilla SonneHello there! I just discovered and read your story and I need to say a few things. First, you are a seriously amazing writer. Yes, the story was not filled with extravagant words and detailed descriptions, but it did not make it bad at all. I love, love, love how with just a few words I can still capture the darkness of the story. The vagueness of each paragraph was perfect.
Secondly, I love Fear. His femininity is adorable and the fact that he seemed so simple yet there is something really dark about him is really beautiful.
Thirdly, I adore the fluff. :D I am a touchy-feely kind of person too and I find Fay just so darn cute.
Well that is all, I guess.
A big fan,
VanillaSonne
6/17/2010 c14 20Insanity Incarnate
Oh Gawd...I cried while reading this. It was just so poetic and beautiful how chu described everything...I luffed how chu made Fay (cause he ish now) and Lily's personality. It was absolutely beautiful.
20Insanity IncarnateOh Gawd...I cried while reading this. It was just so poetic and beautiful how chu described everything...I luffed how chu made Fay (cause he ish now) and Lily's personality. It was absolutely beautiful.
6/5/2009 c11 Ponder000
Oh scary, i am a twin, my twin has thought of killing herself a few times and was even close to it before she chickened out. No wonder why his brother's loss is still affecting him so intensely, i cannot imagine losing my twin, well of course i can but it isnt pretty and probably will be much much worse in real life time than what i see in my mind!
Oh scary, i am a twin, my twin has thought of killing herself a few times and was even close to it before she chickened out. No wonder why his brother's loss is still affecting him so intensely, i cannot imagine losing my twin, well of course i can but it isnt pretty and probably will be much much worse in real life time than what i see in my mind!
6/5/2009 c6 Ponder000
He sighed. “You do know this is going to change everything?”
Abit strange, like he's out of character or sthing...
He sighed. “You do know this is going to change everything?”
Abit strange, like he's out of character or sthing...
6/5/2009 c5 Ponder000
Abit too poetic to be realistic at times. Like what they say.
I thought shooting stars werent stars at all, they're actually just meteors.
Abit too poetic to be realistic at times. Like what they say.
I thought shooting stars werent stars at all, they're actually just meteors.
6/5/2009 c4 Ponder000
Fear is a bit wierd, it dint give that impression in the first chap. Painting his lashes darker? Hms...
you were the most frustrating human being on the planet.”
is this a typo?
Chaps should be abit more meaningful i think
Fear is a bit wierd, it dint give that impression in the first chap. Painting his lashes darker? Hms...
you were the most frustrating human being on the planet.”
is this a typo?
Chaps should be abit more meaningful i think
6/5/2009 c3 Ponder000
Hhaha, some of the things they say in here is very corny but its quite funny to read
Hhaha, some of the things they say in here is very corny but its quite funny to read
6/5/2009 c2 Ponder000
'Fear stiffen.' Think its meant to be Fear stiffened. Anywho, another simple one. I liked the first chapter better but this one also has its highlights like, its quite calm and easy to read
'Fear stiffen.' Think its meant to be Fear stiffened. Anywho, another simple one. I liked the first chapter better but this one also has its highlights like, its quite calm and easy to read
6/5/2009 c1 Ponder000
Cool start, not quite quirky, abit different i guess. Its cool i like it. Simple but not stupid if u know what i mean, not really good at reviewing,..
Cool start, not quite quirky, abit different i guess. Its cool i like it. Simple but not stupid if u know what i mean, not really good at reviewing,..
4/23/2009 c14 5christinaxxyo
I think your writing style is really unique. It's so poetic and it makes everything seem so much more significant. Amazing job :)
5christinaxxyoI think your writing style is really unique. It's so poetic and it makes everything seem so much more significant. Amazing job :)
4/23/2009 c1 christinaxxyo
This was an interesting chapter... Lily seems like an interesting character.
This was an interesting chapter... Lily seems like an interesting character.