for Maybe No, Maybe Yes9/17/2003 c1 
74Letters to No One
I really wasn't sure if I liked this but the last four lines made my decision. Nice work.
74Letters to No OneI really wasn't sure if I liked this but the last four lines made my decision. Nice work.
6/23/2003 c1 8monchilla
it was really really reallt=y really good it really spoke to me i would love to hear more from you.
8monchillait was really really reallt=y really good it really spoke to me i would love to hear more from you.
2/24/2003 c1 1Neverthought
never make promises you can't keep, right?
All in all, I like this poem, the last line is very powerful, and It's made more so by the fact that you enforced it with the title. The rhymes do seem a little uneven, like the poem gets lost a little bit in the middle. All in all though, I like the effect: Choppy, like the disconnected thoughts of someone on the edge.
1Neverthoughtnever make promises you can't keep, right?
All in all, I like this poem, the last line is very powerful, and It's made more so by the fact that you enforced it with the title. The rhymes do seem a little uneven, like the poem gets lost a little bit in the middle. All in all though, I like the effect: Choppy, like the disconnected thoughts of someone on the edge.