for Twisted Fairytale11/7/2005 c1 
18Duck8
OMG so sad but awsome writting i love the imagery and the surness with which you write amazing. Go u :)
18Duck8OMG so sad but awsome writting i love the imagery and the surness with which you write amazing. Go u :)
10/3/2005 c1 11Bee-wytching
I love the poem too. It's not cliche'd because it's far more sensitive than the typical "emo" stuff you find, and it's beautiful in a sad way. There's nothing wrong with this kind of poetry because it helps people let go, not just the author, but the readers as well.
Nicely done.
11Bee-wytchingI love the poem too. It's not cliche'd because it's far more sensitive than the typical "emo" stuff you find, and it's beautiful in a sad way. There's nothing wrong with this kind of poetry because it helps people let go, not just the author, but the readers as well.
Nicely done.
10/3/2005 c1 39Furhead
sorry mr "poetic abortion" but i have to say that your name is "a bit cliche" and also a bit "poser goth", i mean talk about hipocritical and not just hipocritical but condradictory in slagin off the poem and then "waiting patiently for more", i mean what the hell is wrong with you?
the poem however is ace! but it saddens me to think that you think like this and also a bit parranoid as to wether it is me that you are talking about, but obviously ill talk to you more later =).
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39Furheadsorry mr "poetic abortion" but i have to say that your name is "a bit cliche" and also a bit "poser goth", i mean talk about hipocritical and not just hipocritical but condradictory in slagin off the poem and then "waiting patiently for more", i mean what the hell is wrong with you?
the poem however is ace! but it saddens me to think that you think like this and also a bit parranoid as to wether it is me that you are talking about, but obviously ill talk to you more later =).
-(cc)-
10/2/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
"Blade slicing through my arm,As I cry these crimson tears." - I am sorry to say but that is SO cliche. not to be rude but it seriously reminds me of poser gothic "hate-life" poetry. I'm sorry but it grates on my nerves.
alright, overall, I like the begining lines and the flow and the ending seems such a perfect way to end a poem. lovely work, I wait patiently for more.
~* noelle
90poetic abortion"Blade slicing through my arm,As I cry these crimson tears." - I am sorry to say but that is SO cliche. not to be rude but it seriously reminds me of poser gothic "hate-life" poetry. I'm sorry but it grates on my nerves.
alright, overall, I like the begining lines and the flow and the ending seems such a perfect way to end a poem. lovely work, I wait patiently for more.
~* noelle
10/2/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow... and yes, have felt like taht~ creepy in a sense~ good poem
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorowow... and yes, have felt like taht~ creepy in a sense~ good poem
keep writing!