for Not Their Child2/1/2006 c1 DukeOfJazz
Thats really nice. I also like the rythming in alternate verse it gives it a slight rythem.
Thats really nice. I also like the rythming in alternate verse it gives it a slight rythem.
10/3/2005 c1 WormsofCharacter
I especially like the last two stanzas; they have such a flow to them. The painful tone of the poem is very effective, and so vivid I feel like I'm there.
I especially like the last two stanzas; they have such a flow to them. The painful tone of the poem is very effective, and so vivid I feel like I'm there.
10/3/2005 c1 
11Bee-wytching
Very painful. From the past or present?
Never mind. Moving, touching, offering a link for most people. Very well done.
11Bee-wytchingVery painful. From the past or present?
Never mind. Moving, touching, offering a link for most people. Very well done.