for Don't11/3/2005 c1 
28Narcotic-x-Poppies
powerful. i liked this very much, i have a few of the same emotions you portrayed in this poem. Also thank you for commenting my writing
28Narcotic-x-Poppiespowerful. i liked this very much, i have a few of the same emotions you portrayed in this poem. Also thank you for commenting my writing
10/9/2005 c1 183writerforever
Great poem. I like the way you write things. You really put the scene/image in the readers mind. Keep up the good work! :)
183writerforeverGreat poem. I like the way you write things. You really put the scene/image in the readers mind. Keep up the good work! :)
10/4/2005 c1 18lshta
wow this is great! i lurve your writing it is really...yah great and deep and dark and fun fun fun! i luv the line "Drink the blood like a good girl" that made me happy! K/W! oh and have you seen my new one shot Obsession? and i am working on typing up the next chappie of steel so yah...
18lshtawow this is great! i lurve your writing it is really...yah great and deep and dark and fun fun fun! i luv the line "Drink the blood like a good girl" that made me happy! K/W! oh and have you seen my new one shot Obsession? and i am working on typing up the next chappie of steel so yah...