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1/2/2006 c1 73Jezsh
harsh and bitter but desperately beautiful. It sounds like its from the heart.
12/15/2005 c1 2Mykell
"I rape my self in my dreams" - myself is one word"Just to keep my self breathing and a live" - alive is one word

It's definitely an interesting poem. It's 3:30 in the morning so I'm not thinking clearly and don't really know what it's about... but the words are awesome. I can tell that in my numb-brained state.
11/8/2005 c1 2Jada.Black
intense. I love the rawness. Review me sometime ^.^

*Jada Black*
10/17/2005 c1 16NurseDelilah
This is so...wonderful. God, the imagery is just perfection.
10/14/2005 c1 39Alisha Marie
wow...I really liked this poem my favroite lines was...I rape my self in my dreamsJust to feel dirty and a liveWith it's filth beneath my splintered soul.

Yeah..I think alot of people feel this way. Great job.
10/12/2005 c1 18Son Of Evil
Nice. Reflects my own thoughts. Although I don't really have a feminine casket. That said, I have quite a bit of femininity in me, though you wouldn't think it looking at me ;)
10/9/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
This old and tired virtues heart..virtuousJust to feel dirty and a live..alive

I might rate this whatever it is hat comes after K+ (T i think).. I do like it though.. really interesting & i like the whole rose thing
10/6/2005 c1 141AllyCred
this was good...very different...but amazing...well done...i love it.

lots of love~AC~
10/6/2005 c1 sunday night sky
wow - this is unlike anything i've read before; its really good (for want of a better adjective) - love the wording, keep going x
10/5/2005 c1 59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
Hey...soz i havent emailed u l8ly...but awesum poem...creepy, but aweseom, some very powerful sentances...well done^_^
10/4/2005 c1 65Aquafied
i am so out of it, all i got was the word rape and dreams.

beautiful none the less.quite tangible.
10/4/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
Whoa. That was... interesting. I didn't really get it. But it was powerful. That's all I got. Sorry. I'm kind of tired so I'm sorry I can't give you a better review. But... wow. It was quite amazing but for the fact that it went over my head.

*shrugs*

Umm... you're awesome?

Does that make up for the crappy review?

lol

~Stormy

^_^
10/4/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
Wow, this is very powerful. I love the imagry you incorperate here. Beautiful. Thanks for the review, btw. I liked it. In your poem, I especially loved the lines "I wish to peel away/ at this feminine casket." Very awesome. Great stuff! KW!

~Davida
10/4/2005 c1 64not sure yet
interesting oposites in the first and last stanzas, the pornographic roses is pretty hot, prettyful, i dont know, this is really good, nicely done
10/4/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
That is so creepy I really don't know what else to say! :)
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