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10/10/2005 c1 BLANK00000000000000000
Once again you've created a master piece ! I'm adding you to my favorite list.
10/10/2005 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Awesome poem. Didn't really perdict the ending, but I really didn't try. Great impact, very unique. I thought that was very clever writing that at the end. Over all, dark, dank, and deep. Love it, keep it up!
10/9/2005 c1 12TaNTaLiziNG TRutH
thanks for your reviews of my poems. i really like this one. the end of it was very clever(in my opinion) im looking forward to reading more of your stuff
10/8/2005 c1 64Kassia Scarlett
Ouch! For a minute there I thought it was happy. I like. Well don't take that as "ha ha I am uplifted by your pain" I like the way you switch up so suddenly at the end. At first it's all Rainbow flowers La di da di da, and then Blood. It's a wonderful little shock. R&R some of my stuff if you like.
10/4/2005 c1 Disturbed Insomniac
i like that one too. i dont know what to say. your poems are great. i can relate to this one, too. *smiles*
10/4/2005 c1 141AllyCred
WOW - the ending is what impacted me the most...well done...i think everyone can relate to this in some way...i know i can more, then you know...beautifully written, i love it, this has left me speechless.

lots of love~AC~
10/4/2005 c1 22The Sweetest Oblivion
dark and powerful. i really like this one.

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