for Senseless10/17/2005 c1 Alice Fey
Ooh...this is nice, this should be turned into a song. You should become a lyricist.
Ooh...this is nice, this should be turned into a song. You should become a lyricist.
10/8/2005 c1 
64Kassia Scarlett
Ouch! Does someone need and Ice pack for that burn? (I'm not trying to be funny or play down the seriousness of it or anything) Wow. That was harsh. Whoever got on you black list sure is stupid. Don't worry, whoever he is for what ever he did. He'll get his. Very nice! I like the parenthesees (I'm sure that's spelled wrong), I'm not sure what purpose they serve but they are something intresting and new. They seem to give it more special than the surrounding text. Anyway, good work!
64Kassia ScarlettOuch! Does someone need and Ice pack for that burn? (I'm not trying to be funny or play down the seriousness of it or anything) Wow. That was harsh. Whoever got on you black list sure is stupid. Don't worry, whoever he is for what ever he did. He'll get his. Very nice! I like the parenthesees (I'm sure that's spelled wrong), I'm not sure what purpose they serve but they are something intresting and new. They seem to give it more special than the surrounding text. Anyway, good work!
10/7/2005 c1 128Cordelia Riordan
I like this one. It reminds me of something I wrote a while back. Thank you for reviewing one of my poems. :) Keep up the good work with your poetry. :)
128Cordelia RiordanI like this one. It reminds me of something I wrote a while back. Thank you for reviewing one of my poems. :) Keep up the good work with your poetry. :)
10/5/2005 c1 8demondragon666
sweet! you could so turn that into a song...that is an awesome poem i loves it!luv ya girl!
8demondragon666sweet! you could so turn that into a song...that is an awesome poem i loves it!luv ya girl!
10/4/2005 c1 Disturbed Insomniac
i like how you repeated "snseless" it putting "fucking senseless" made it even more powerful. very good.
i like how you repeated "snseless" it putting "fucking senseless" made it even more powerful. very good.
10/4/2005 c1 22The Sweetest Oblivion
wow. harsh and honest. great job, i like how you let it all out. keep up the good work!
22The Sweetest Oblivionwow. harsh and honest. great job, i like how you let it all out. keep up the good work!