for Here you lay10/4/2005 c1 
4Aldarona Finarfin
Well...There's some good imagery here, but I'm a little confused at the point of this poem. Are you writing to a boy you like? Are you writing about a dream you had? Are you creating a metaphor? And who or what are the demons?
4Aldarona FinarfinWell...There's some good imagery here, but I'm a little confused at the point of this poem. Are you writing to a boy you like? Are you writing about a dream you had? Are you creating a metaphor? And who or what are the demons?