for Sharp veins laced delicately under your skin
3510/4/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
I felt the title was a bit too long. Maybe shorten it to "sharp veins."
I liked "drunken starry sky." Some parts seemed a bit cliche, but it was a generally pleasant read.
-simpleton
I felt the title was a bit too long. Maybe shorten it to "sharp veins."
I liked "drunken starry sky." Some parts seemed a bit cliche, but it was a generally pleasant read.
-simpleton