for Snippets7/8/2006 c2 Black and White Dreams
-sigh- Natural beauty is always so much more beautiful than a mask of makeup... So true, so beautiful. Nice work.
-sigh- Natural beauty is always so much more beautiful than a mask of makeup... So true, so beautiful. Nice work.
6/14/2006 c3 
5mormonboy
Insteresting conclusion. Maybe don't take such big step, excersize the mind, but don't destroy it. Advice from someone who really doesn't know what he is talking about.
5mormonboyInsteresting conclusion. Maybe don't take such big step, excersize the mind, but don't destroy it. Advice from someone who really doesn't know what he is talking about.
6/14/2006 c2 mormonboy
This snippet is really awesome. I like it. I would really like to see the whole poem though, when you finish it, okay?
This snippet is really awesome. I like it. I would really like to see the whole poem though, when you finish it, okay?
6/14/2006 c1 mormonboy
Hey, we all know there is one who can make us better. I am probably the worst at doing what you are expressing right here. I admit it.
Hey, we all know there is one who can make us better. I am probably the worst at doing what you are expressing right here. I admit it.