for Two Teens and a Baby10/20/2006 c3 
8incandescente
your author note crushed me. donovan dont want her? why? haha. i really thought it was the 'i like her so i show it by teasing her' syndrome. anyway, do continue writing! i really like this story.
8incandescenteyour author note crushed me. donovan dont want her? why? haha. i really thought it was the 'i like her so i show it by teasing her' syndrome. anyway, do continue writing! i really like this story.
9/26/2006 c3 4FunkeeMunky
oh, I like it, youre a very good writer. I'll be keeping a look-out for the update.
4FunkeeMunkyoh, I like it, youre a very good writer. I'll be keeping a look-out for the update.
9/25/2006 c3 1goodbyemylover
wow, great chapter. deffinitely worth the wait. i do not like patrick at ALL! god, what a jerk. and btw, im sorry about your parents. update soon, you're a great writer!
1goodbyemyloverwow, great chapter. deffinitely worth the wait. i do not like patrick at ALL! god, what a jerk. and btw, im sorry about your parents. update soon, you're a great writer!
9/24/2006 c3 7rockrose
Great story! I hope you update it soon.
I'm really anxious to read about the project! And I hope she dumps Pat soon!
7rockroseGreat story! I hope you update it soon.
I'm really anxious to read about the project! And I hope she dumps Pat soon!
6/7/2006 c2 1goodbyemylover
hey, i just read your story, it has a really great plot! i noticed you haven't updated since january, i was just wondering if you are going to keep going with it cause i really like it!
1goodbyemyloverhey, i just read your story, it has a really great plot! i noticed you haven't updated since january, i was just wondering if you are going to keep going with it cause i really like it!
1/16/2006 c1 Cama
I like the way this is going and the Title really got my attention!Keep it going...
I like the way this is going and the Title really got my attention!Keep it going...
1/16/2006 c2 christine daae
good story! seems like donvan has a crush on her!
good story! seems like donvan has a crush on her!
1/16/2006 c2 C. Aleshi
=) I love it! Good to hear that the most popular girl in the school, Tiffany isnt like those cliche ones, about them being bitches and stuff. =)I like Brett better than Patrick though... Patrick's... hm.. over protective (sorta selfish and bossy)..Donovan is so EVIL! lol.. roaches! ew!Update soon!
-IP.
=) I love it! Good to hear that the most popular girl in the school, Tiffany isnt like those cliche ones, about them being bitches and stuff. =)I like Brett better than Patrick though... Patrick's... hm.. over protective (sorta selfish and bossy)..Donovan is so EVIL! lol.. roaches! ew!Update soon!
-IP.
10/5/2005 c1 1Shorty Baby
I like it so far but you got to stick on top of it! yay! Have fun hope to hear from you soon!
1Shorty BabyI like it so far but you got to stick on top of it! yay! Have fun hope to hear from you soon!
10/5/2005 c1 AzaLea
hayy! This is an awesome-licious story! My, Donovan sounds like a bit of a jerk, doesn't he? I like the name "Brooke" and this story caught my attention throughout. Keep uup the good job!
hayy! This is an awesome-licious story! My, Donovan sounds like a bit of a jerk, doesn't he? I like the name "Brooke" and this story caught my attention throughout. Keep uup the good job!