
1/28/2006 c1
41sarah1491
Very interesting poem. I just found something. In the phrase:
"Are they here to guard and protectOr steal my life away."
I think the period should be a question mark, should it? Like the other rhetorical questions. Anyway, I love the poems you write. :) Keep writing!

Very interesting poem. I just found something. In the phrase:
"Are they here to guard and protectOr steal my life away."
I think the period should be a question mark, should it? Like the other rhetorical questions. Anyway, I love the poems you write. :) Keep writing!