for When I Fall in Love11/24/2012 c1 Humzy1
I got so carried away with this story, that i want to read more! please tell you'll finish this whole story because it's soooo good! the relationship with Natalie and Derek is so cute and stunning :)
I got so carried away with this story, that i want to read more! please tell you'll finish this whole story because it's soooo good! the relationship with Natalie and Derek is so cute and stunning :)
11/24/2012 c6 Humzy
what book is this?
what book is this?
3/15/2009 c7 Alenor
oh, designing you ex-best friend/ex-boyfriend's fiance's wedding dress would suck! can't wait for more ~ Alenor
oh, designing you ex-best friend/ex-boyfriend's fiance's wedding dress would suck! can't wait for more ~ Alenor
5/30/2008 c7 
7ms. thorek
do you still have plans on finishing this story? i hope you do cause cliffhangers really really make me crazy. the first chapters got me hooked. please please continue writing.
7ms. thorekdo you still have plans on finishing this story? i hope you do cause cliffhangers really really make me crazy. the first chapters got me hooked. please please continue writing.
7/26/2007 c7 1Maria Minamino
It's a good thing Amy already left or she'd have a fit lmao
this is so good so far! I'm really enjoying it!
aww - poor derek and natalie - i can't wait to see what happens to them :D
1Maria MinaminoIt's a good thing Amy already left or she'd have a fit lmao
this is so good so far! I'm really enjoying it!
aww - poor derek and natalie - i can't wait to see what happens to them :D
3/6/2007 c7 1Gypsy Feather
Wow! Great story. Are you planning to ever update again? I really hope you do, as I would love to find out what happens with Derek and Lee.
1Gypsy FeatherWow! Great story. Are you planning to ever update again? I really hope you do, as I would love to find out what happens with Derek and Lee.
3/8/2006 c7 sexyz-bratz
hyey, good so far... i just hope that it doesn't end up like ur other story Patricks and Westners...
hyey, good so far... i just hope that it doesn't end up like ur other story Patricks and Westners...
3/5/2006 c7 13Bridge Ann Wall
This chapter was really interesting. It makes me dislike Amy even more... the way she reacted seemed so fake and she's not even remotely nice to Natalie. I like Derek and Natalie together. I think this pace is about right if this is going to become a story about Natalie trying to win him back and him having to decide between the two of them (especially if you only want it to be about 14 chapters). Although you might want to write some longer chapters if you plan to get the whole story in, at least that's my impression. Anyway, this is a really good story. Please update soon.
13Bridge Ann WallThis chapter was really interesting. It makes me dislike Amy even more... the way she reacted seemed so fake and she's not even remotely nice to Natalie. I like Derek and Natalie together. I think this pace is about right if this is going to become a story about Natalie trying to win him back and him having to decide between the two of them (especially if you only want it to be about 14 chapters). Although you might want to write some longer chapters if you plan to get the whole story in, at least that's my impression. Anyway, this is a really good story. Please update soon.
3/3/2006 c5 7VEH
I like this storyline, and your writing style is nice. However, most all of the main characters seem terribly conceited. "My perfect complexion", "Fabulous designer", etc. I don't know about other readers, but perfect characters are the most annoying thing to me.
7VEHI like this storyline, and your writing style is nice. However, most all of the main characters seem terribly conceited. "My perfect complexion", "Fabulous designer", etc. I don't know about other readers, but perfect characters are the most annoying thing to me.
3/3/2006 c7 xdancedestinyxox
wow. Just WOW. this is a great story. It is really well written. I like how the chapter names go along with the lyrics. That's cool. I wish Natalie still had her blonde hair though. D: Oh well. Really great story. keep it up.
wow. Just WOW. this is a great story. It is really well written. I like how the chapter names go along with the lyrics. That's cool. I wish Natalie still had her blonde hair though. D: Oh well. Really great story. keep it up.
3/3/2006 c7 dOrKy-GuRl03
wonder to know on how the story is going to end though...anyways so loving it..can't wait the next chapter to update though...anyways going to head out then..so peace out gurl...o yeah hope that derek and her will be together soon though..bye-bye then...
wonder to know on how the story is going to end though...anyways so loving it..can't wait the next chapter to update though...anyways going to head out then..so peace out gurl...o yeah hope that derek and her will be together soon though..bye-bye then...
3/3/2006 c7 citrus raindrops
i just found your story today, and i love it =] the plot, the characters, everything. however, in this chapter, i didn't really like how Natalie acted towards the end. it made her seem like those scheming girls who steal other poeple's boyfriends. i would have understood better if she was really drunk, but since she's aware of what she's doing... it seems like she's changed her personality. other than that, your writing's terrific and i'm putting you on my author alert list =]
i just found your story today, and i love it =] the plot, the characters, everything. however, in this chapter, i didn't really like how Natalie acted towards the end. it made her seem like those scheming girls who steal other poeple's boyfriends. i would have understood better if she was really drunk, but since she's aware of what she's doing... it seems like she's changed her personality. other than that, your writing's terrific and i'm putting you on my author alert list =]
3/3/2006 c7 TricksterGoddess
This fic is freakin AWESOME! It's like THE story of all stories and it's like a film in my head as I read your wonderful words. How can you say that this isn't really good? Although you may just do this as a hobby, I still think you're a writer, no one can right this well and not BE a writer in some form other than a hobby, but thats just my opinion. Please update soon and keep up the good work^_^!
This fic is freakin AWESOME! It's like THE story of all stories and it's like a film in my head as I read your wonderful words. How can you say that this isn't really good? Although you may just do this as a hobby, I still think you're a writer, no one can right this well and not BE a writer in some form other than a hobby, but thats just my opinion. Please update soon and keep up the good work^_^!