for makeBELIEVE6/22/2006 c1 plchldr
'threadbare fantasies forgone long ago'
ack, that line gives me the shivers. I wasn't sure if I'd like the huge-paragraph formatting, but as it turns out, I did. :)
'threadbare fantasies forgone long ago'
ack, that line gives me the shivers. I wasn't sure if I'd like the huge-paragraph formatting, but as it turns out, I did. :)
10/28/2005 c1 
16moscowsnow
I love the style and the flow and the imagery - it's just awesome, really. Definitely adding this to my favourites.
16moscowsnowI love the style and the flow and the imagery - it's just awesome, really. Definitely adding this to my favourites.
10/17/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
wow very powerful adn well done.. the ending is very powerful and I like how it ties in with the beginning... btw if you could tell me which of my poems you like best id appreciate it a lot.. thanks
612simpleplan13wow very powerful adn well done.. the ending is very powerful and I like how it ties in with the beginning... btw if you could tell me which of my poems you like best id appreciate it a lot.. thanks
10/12/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
I love this. I love how you took such an over-written idea and you've made it SO unique. You're so talented, and I'm jealous :p. Though not jealous enough to keep you off of my favorites list.
-Hillary-
58White Tea and GingerI love this. I love how you took such an over-written idea and you've made it SO unique. You're so talented, and I'm jealous :p. Though not jealous enough to keep you off of my favorites list.
-Hillary-
10/11/2005 c1 59HellHeartedlyBent
...no way...no way...wow...there is no way your that good. holy crap.
59HellHeartedlyBent...no way...no way...wow...there is no way your that good. holy crap.
10/10/2005 c1 63lackluster
such pretty wrods mixed in with tragedy. a very messed up work of art. i so love that.
63lacklustersuch pretty wrods mixed in with tragedy. a very messed up work of art. i so love that.
10/8/2005 c1 77by His blood
this. was. fucking. brilliant. i love this, & now i am definitely interested in reading more of your work. this was just ... amazing. excellent job. kudos, & & please keep writing.
77by His bloodthis. was. fucking. brilliant. i love this, & now i am definitely interested in reading more of your work. this was just ... amazing. excellent job. kudos, & & please keep writing.
10/8/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Seems like a lot of words when I look at it, but very well written in the end.
194Aslan IsraelSeems like a lot of words when I look at it, but very well written in the end.
10/7/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I like how you toy and play with this; this is not a black and white type of poem that you cut and dry to fit into a category, it kind of transends genre. The detail really makes this come alive, a modern midevil heroine type of story. I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI like how you toy and play with this; this is not a black and white type of poem that you cut and dry to fit into a category, it kind of transends genre. The detail really makes this come alive, a modern midevil heroine type of story. I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.