
8/22/2008 c1 Kit
Please, for all things good and holy in this world up date! I haven't been this into a story since I got the last Diana Gabaldon book. Seriously this is too good for you to end it here. You have real talent with characters and emoution I am so into the characters i actually cried. In my defence i was listing to city of angles sound track for the flash back when shasta lost his voice. Is Rhian going to turn out to be some kind of desent? I have fun hating him. Of course you could update and wouldn't have to ask obnoxious questions like suck. I love Toulouse though, he is so adorable and honest, and I love how jazz became instantly protective, so cute! Ok i am done now. Well your amazing. Kay now i am done...
Please, for all things good and holy in this world up date! I haven't been this into a story since I got the last Diana Gabaldon book. Seriously this is too good for you to end it here. You have real talent with characters and emoution I am so into the characters i actually cried. In my defence i was listing to city of angles sound track for the flash back when shasta lost his voice. Is Rhian going to turn out to be some kind of desent? I have fun hating him. Of course you could update and wouldn't have to ask obnoxious questions like suck. I love Toulouse though, he is so adorable and honest, and I love how jazz became instantly protective, so cute! Ok i am done now. Well your amazing. Kay now i am done...
8/18/2008 c33 WarpedMinded
Wow, I love this story. Great plot!
I hope everyone ends happy.
And..wow you have been going with this story a long time! I could never be like that, I wish I could though.
Wow, I love this story. Great plot!
I hope everyone ends happy.
And..wow you have been going with this story a long time! I could never be like that, I wish I could though.
8/5/2008 c33
17JtheChosen1
HOLY CRAP THIS IS AWESOME!
seriously, i couldn't stop reading this story!
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!

HOLY CRAP THIS IS AWESOME!
seriously, i couldn't stop reading this story!
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!
8/3/2008 c33
1chazzybiatch
Ah update please!
I love how Toulouse is so nice and gentle!
Will Rhian keep his affections for Dawn?
Is Dawn really a witch!

Ah update please!
I love how Toulouse is so nice and gentle!
Will Rhian keep his affections for Dawn?
Is Dawn really a witch!
7/31/2008 c33
5Rachizzle
OH MY. Dawn's got his voice back. :3 And Biko and Nikko can be all lovey dovey now. Yay for all the couples. XD!

OH MY. Dawn's got his voice back. :3 And Biko and Nikko can be all lovey dovey now. Yay for all the couples. XD!
7/28/2008 c1
15Bluorange
Oh. I like this story! Yay! I wanna read more! WOO! MAGIC FUCKING ROCKS! THIS IS MY IDEAL YAOI! AND I LOVE PRACTICAL MAGIC!
The book was ok too! :)
-Blue (Orange is getting her Psycho-analysis done so they can see if she needs to be locked up for her... actions)

Oh. I like this story! Yay! I wanna read more! WOO! MAGIC FUCKING ROCKS! THIS IS MY IDEAL YAOI! AND I LOVE PRACTICAL MAGIC!
The book was ok too! :)
-Blue (Orange is getting her Psycho-analysis done so they can see if she needs to be locked up for her... actions)
7/26/2008 c33
2MisterScotty
I thoroughly enjoy this story. You've created your own world and it's captivating. The whole witch and magic idea is old, but you made it interesting and new. I love how it made them have familiars because the familiars just add to the story and make it so much better. I simply adored the Harry Potter add ins that you had them say. It was hilarious when he tried to compare them.
Each character has depth and complexity. The supposed antagonists in the beginning seem evil or extremely mean, but i like how you made them human, explained why the way they were. You gave them a story, emotions, you made them 3 dimensional, not two. I really like it when authors make their villains, not really be the villains, instead complicated people.
I love how everyone in this story interacts, it's well put together. I immensely like how long and detailed every chapter is.
I just love, love, when everything starts to connect together, things click, and pieces fall together. In the last few chapters, i got goosebumps and read faster because i was on the edge of my seat when all the seemingly important stories started to connect together, become clear and intertwined.
This story is so original. It's its own and is stunningly lovable and entertaining. It's well written, it seems as though you've put a lot of thought into the story.
From this long review, you can gather that i am sucked into this story and in love. It is fantastic. I wish more stories were as original and well written as this one. I can tell you're a good author because i am in love with another story of yours.
I sincerely hope you update soon and write more chapters for me to fall head over heals for. This story is just so breathe taking.

I thoroughly enjoy this story. You've created your own world and it's captivating. The whole witch and magic idea is old, but you made it interesting and new. I love how it made them have familiars because the familiars just add to the story and make it so much better. I simply adored the Harry Potter add ins that you had them say. It was hilarious when he tried to compare them.
Each character has depth and complexity. The supposed antagonists in the beginning seem evil or extremely mean, but i like how you made them human, explained why the way they were. You gave them a story, emotions, you made them 3 dimensional, not two. I really like it when authors make their villains, not really be the villains, instead complicated people.
I love how everyone in this story interacts, it's well put together. I immensely like how long and detailed every chapter is.
I just love, love, when everything starts to connect together, things click, and pieces fall together. In the last few chapters, i got goosebumps and read faster because i was on the edge of my seat when all the seemingly important stories started to connect together, become clear and intertwined.
This story is so original. It's its own and is stunningly lovable and entertaining. It's well written, it seems as though you've put a lot of thought into the story.
From this long review, you can gather that i am sucked into this story and in love. It is fantastic. I wish more stories were as original and well written as this one. I can tell you're a good author because i am in love with another story of yours.
I sincerely hope you update soon and write more chapters for me to fall head over heals for. This story is just so breathe taking.
7/26/2008 c33 lesbian-lover256
Please update and fast cause I REALLY want to know what haooens next! Thank You :D
Please update and fast cause I REALLY want to know what haooens next! Thank You :D
7/26/2008 c33 HentaiZaru
How do you leave such a gigantic cliffhanger just to leave ANOTHER ONE? Gosh, you're so frustrating! Update soon!
How do you leave such a gigantic cliffhanger just to leave ANOTHER ONE? Gosh, you're so frustrating! Update soon!
7/24/2008 c33
2TishDaFish
-spazzes-
Great story, my mate sent me the link, and I just love it, can't wait for the next update, definate fave and watch right here.

-spazzes-
Great story, my mate sent me the link, and I just love it, can't wait for the next update, definate fave and watch right here.
7/12/2008 c33
2Serolina
WAHO! AN UPDATE! THANKS THE GODS IT'S A MIRACLE! why so shoet though? WE WANT MORE! I love this story so much and can't wait to read the next chapter!

WAHO! AN UPDATE! THANKS THE GODS IT'S A MIRACLE! why so shoet though? WE WANT MORE! I love this story so much and can't wait to read the next chapter!
7/11/2008 c33
2RoxxorzBoxxerz
Rad. i seriously do love this, like your imagination, on making this! ^_^

Rad. i seriously do love this, like your imagination, on making this! ^_^
7/10/2008 c33
1ninja-master-of-the-moon
omg this story is fucking amazing ^_^ i love it (its going on my faves) well anyways update soon

omg this story is fucking amazing ^_^ i love it (its going on my faves) well anyways update soon
7/9/2008 c33
3Duuude
I'm that person who badgered you for updates on devart and then never read the next chapter! *waves*
Now that I've read it... XD
Can't wait for more though, this story really is awesome and imaginative. I'll be waiting. Don't feel bad, everyone has lives. And really tenses or grammar or whatever don't matter to me, I'm just aching to know what hapens. Haha.
Nice filler. *wink*

I'm that person who badgered you for updates on devart and then never read the next chapter! *waves*
Now that I've read it... XD
Can't wait for more though, this story really is awesome and imaginative. I'll be waiting. Don't feel bad, everyone has lives. And really tenses or grammar or whatever don't matter to me, I'm just aching to know what hapens. Haha.
Nice filler. *wink*