
1/24/2006 c14 Ashley
Awsome chapter. I love the scene with the fairies how you described them it was very nicely done. I love this story so much. it'll be interesting to see just how much dimitri and shasta were when they were together and what changed dimitri.
Awsome chapter. I love the scene with the fairies how you described them it was very nicely done. I love this story so much. it'll be interesting to see just how much dimitri and shasta were when they were together and what changed dimitri.
1/24/2006 c14
2Ubiquitous Muffin Smuggler
Love the story! I can't wait for Shasta to finally make a move on Dawn, by himself! Please update! Yum..and I also can't wait to the other kissn-scenes

Love the story! I can't wait for Shasta to finally make a move on Dawn, by himself! Please update! Yum..and I also can't wait to the other kissn-scenes
1/22/2006 c14 SiriusMoonPuppy
This is the BEST original story i have ever read! gods, i love Shasta and Dawn haha and that kiss was hot too =P i was just wondering if maybe Justinian (sorries if i get his name wrong .
This is the BEST original story i have ever read! gods, i love Shasta and Dawn haha and that kiss was hot too =P i was just wondering if maybe Justinian (sorries if i get his name wrong .
1/22/2006 c14
1Prisoner-11
Oh-kay, I don't HATE Dimitri. Just extremly DISLIKE... Hehe! They kissed finally! Will Shasta tell Dawn how to undo the love spell, or will he not so that Dawn will continue to like him, 'cause he's afraid that Dawn wont like him as soon as it's gone.

Oh-kay, I don't HATE Dimitri. Just extremly DISLIKE... Hehe! They kissed finally! Will Shasta tell Dawn how to undo the love spell, or will he not so that Dawn will continue to like him, 'cause he's afraid that Dawn wont like him as soon as it's gone.
1/22/2006 c14
1Starlilly
Hm...So Shasta knows about the love spell. I figured he should, since his specialty is love spells.
And they kissed. Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hm...So Shasta knows about the love spell. I figured he should, since his specialty is love spells.
And they kissed. Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter!
1/22/2006 c14
7CloudyDay
Woo! Yay smart i am. ^_^ Nice plot twists! Poor Dawn, he probably won't take the fact that the dude who stole his voice has raised his cheating boyfriend from the dead very well, will he? Things just don't seem to be going his way.
I felt bad for him when he fell over and people laughed. Aww. So sad.
I loved the whole kiss-the-statue thing by the way. :)
little dimitri is cute. too bad he grows into such a basard. :P
Please write more soon!

Woo! Yay smart i am. ^_^ Nice plot twists! Poor Dawn, he probably won't take the fact that the dude who stole his voice has raised his cheating boyfriend from the dead very well, will he? Things just don't seem to be going his way.
I felt bad for him when he fell over and people laughed. Aww. So sad.
I loved the whole kiss-the-statue thing by the way. :)
little dimitri is cute. too bad he grows into such a basard. :P
Please write more soon!
1/22/2006 c13 Ai No Ame
I forgot to add more things! So I gotta write an anonymous, but just know it's me!
I was always curious about Shasta's real hair color...I admit, the blond and blue DOES fit him better. I can picture the chocolate locks, but it's...SO UNLIKE him. I can't wait til he reveals his eyes. Is he really sensitive to light, and is that an excuse? I'm just curious if something changed from when he was a little boy. I love Shasta so much...but not as much as Dawn! :p
Is Shasta a family outcast? It sometimes seems like he's well-liked and other times, not. I mean, they kinda rejected his familiar...I'm just curious! I love how you spin all these plots! You seem to answer one question and leave two more in its aftermath!
Anything else? I dunno...oh well. Update soon!
I forgot to add more things! So I gotta write an anonymous, but just know it's me!
I was always curious about Shasta's real hair color...I admit, the blond and blue DOES fit him better. I can picture the chocolate locks, but it's...SO UNLIKE him. I can't wait til he reveals his eyes. Is he really sensitive to light, and is that an excuse? I'm just curious if something changed from when he was a little boy. I love Shasta so much...but not as much as Dawn! :p
Is Shasta a family outcast? It sometimes seems like he's well-liked and other times, not. I mean, they kinda rejected his familiar...I'm just curious! I love how you spin all these plots! You seem to answer one question and leave two more in its aftermath!
Anything else? I dunno...oh well. Update soon!
1/22/2006 c14 Ai No Ame
AW! This chapter was great! I'm so glad that Dawn and Shasta kissed! YES! I was kinda sad that the fairies were so mean...Dawn's so cute! But I got to see some insight to Chad, and then, I was a bit happier.
The last insert about Dimitri was so sad. I hope we get to hear about what made him become a black witch, cause i'm curious if Shasta was so nice to him! Now I can kinda see where Dimitri gets his powers from cause he had no voice and now he can steal them...very interesting!
I did not know Shasta knew about the spell! ARGH! Now I REALLY wonder how they are going to get together. The way it seems like is that Shasta will only think Dawn likes him cause of that and I think it will be hard for Dawn to prove it's MORE than that. I wonder if Shasta will reveal that he knows what Dawn did...SHOCKER!
I can't wait to read more. I always look forward to reading the latest chapter. You write so amusingly, I always hate it when I reach the end. THEREFORE, update soon! Thankies for another wonderful chapter!
AW! This chapter was great! I'm so glad that Dawn and Shasta kissed! YES! I was kinda sad that the fairies were so mean...Dawn's so cute! But I got to see some insight to Chad, and then, I was a bit happier.
The last insert about Dimitri was so sad. I hope we get to hear about what made him become a black witch, cause i'm curious if Shasta was so nice to him! Now I can kinda see where Dimitri gets his powers from cause he had no voice and now he can steal them...very interesting!
I did not know Shasta knew about the spell! ARGH! Now I REALLY wonder how they are going to get together. The way it seems like is that Shasta will only think Dawn likes him cause of that and I think it will be hard for Dawn to prove it's MORE than that. I wonder if Shasta will reveal that he knows what Dawn did...SHOCKER!
I can't wait to read more. I always look forward to reading the latest chapter. You write so amusingly, I always hate it when I reach the end. THEREFORE, update soon! Thankies for another wonderful chapter!
1/21/2006 c14
2Jayn
Aw! THEY KISSED! YAY! *jumpes up and down excitedly* That is cute! i like little Demetri. He was cool. I wonder why he became bad? *Shrugs and Hugz Nikko Doll* PLEASE update! ^_^

Aw! THEY KISSED! YAY! *jumpes up and down excitedly* That is cute! i like little Demetri. He was cool. I wonder why he became bad? *Shrugs and Hugz Nikko Doll* PLEASE update! ^_^
1/21/2006 c14
25Esquirella
That Cella is a pill. LOL! Great background on Shasta, as well as Dimitri.

That Cella is a pill. LOL! Great background on Shasta, as well as Dimitri.
1/21/2006 c5
7oh so cliche
I like this alot. I find it interesting and different. Which is a real turn on for me (in writing).

I like this alot. I find it interesting and different. Which is a real turn on for me (in writing).
1/21/2006 c14
16ola
whooho! more more more! i liked the part about the make out session...although it was only in shasta's point of view. so i wonder if dawn will remember any of it. ... he didn't seem to, at least not the moment he just woke up. but it would be hilarious if he did remember, when he sees shasta again. i'd give a lot to see his face at that moment. hehe =)update your lovely story soon! (and yeah, the part about dimitri was cool. it makes him an even more interesting vilain... not that he wasn't interesting before. ) ok, that was long enough! so please update! =)

whooho! more more more! i liked the part about the make out session...although it was only in shasta's point of view. so i wonder if dawn will remember any of it. ... he didn't seem to, at least not the moment he just woke up. but it would be hilarious if he did remember, when he sees shasta again. i'd give a lot to see his face at that moment. hehe =)update your lovely story soon! (and yeah, the part about dimitri was cool. it makes him an even more interesting vilain... not that he wasn't interesting before. ) ok, that was long enough! so please update! =)
1/21/2006 c14 Caethes
Oh! I loved this chapter. Although, if I were Dawn (which I am glad I am not because I would make him only weirder than he is now) I would've kept walking away at the fairy part. Bu~ut, he did get to suck face when he came back! WOO! Anyway, I love Dimitri. I hope to have my little fanart of him and Justinian done soon. :D I love you.
Oh! I loved this chapter. Although, if I were Dawn (which I am glad I am not because I would make him only weirder than he is now) I would've kept walking away at the fairy part. Bu~ut, he did get to suck face when he came back! WOO! Anyway, I love Dimitri. I hope to have my little fanart of him and Justinian done soon. :D I love you.