for Mother, Love Me10/30/2005 c1 
64Tatsu the Blade Star
Powerful. I am kind of detached from it too far to feel it, and yet I still can. The weight that we bear sucks, and it on;y gets worse... Someday they won't be there to hold us back... or push us forward. Just remember that.
Later...
64Tatsu the Blade StarPowerful. I am kind of detached from it too far to feel it, and yet I still can. The weight that we bear sucks, and it on;y gets worse... Someday they won't be there to hold us back... or push us forward. Just remember that.
Later...
10/9/2005 c1 180naughtgreen
I feel the franticness. Sometimes I want to wake up but most of the time i just want to go to sleep.
180naughtgreenI feel the franticness. Sometimes I want to wake up but most of the time i just want to go to sleep.
10/8/2005 c1 50Chandra-Moon
wow...very powerful. relationships with mothers are very difficult (or at least with mine) and you did a great job of showing the complexities of them.good job, keep writing.
50Chandra-Moonwow...very powerful. relationships with mothers are very difficult (or at least with mine) and you did a great job of showing the complexities of them.good job, keep writing.
10/8/2005 c1 81Princess-anna57
Impressive. Very, very impressive. I adore your work! Excellent! ^_^ Keep writing!
~Anna~
81Princess-anna57Impressive. Very, very impressive. I adore your work! Excellent! ^_^ Keep writing!
~Anna~