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10/9/2005 c1 Dan Sabato
I totally agree. I love your rhyme scheme and I especially like the magic wand part. (and the pool part and the rest of the poem.) It was quite hoopy. You are a frood.
10/9/2005 c1 53destinee ariarti
third to last line made me cry

this comes so close to home.

it's a difficult subject matter for writing, and I commend you for expressing it so eloquently.

word choice, amazing - phrasing, amazing .. overall, an amazing work. this is to be added to my favorite stories list, because I've fallen in love with it =)

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