for Delicate History1/8/2009 c1 
18DarkRose1593
I loved this. It's awesome how you wrote such a good poem about the life and death of a butterfly.
18DarkRose1593I loved this. It's awesome how you wrote such a good poem about the life and death of a butterfly.
5/21/2008 c1 27Icy Angel Mei-Chan
This is the stanza meanings:
1st stanza=It Hatches to a Caterpillar
2nd stanza=It Turns Into a Cocoon
3rd & 4th stanza=It Transfroms Into a Butterfly
5th stanza=Death of the Butterfly
It's so cute!
27Icy Angel Mei-ChanThis is the stanza meanings:
1st stanza=It Hatches to a Caterpillar
2nd stanza=It Turns Into a Cocoon
3rd & 4th stanza=It Transfroms Into a Butterfly
5th stanza=Death of the Butterfly
It's so cute!
1/28/2006 c1 41ConcealedWay
Everywhere I go, you produce such beautiful poems. This is just another example.
:)
41ConcealedWayEverywhere I go, you produce such beautiful poems. This is just another example.
:)
11/1/2005 c1 80citrus scented
wow this is quite unusual. mainly because theres not much emotion- but then again it is just a butterfly. still some beautiful words and images you lay out here. its very effective the whole: "hello, goodbye," it really captures something discovering the world, espeacilly as it sounds quite innocent.
ps. i just read your bio, and found the stadge of love thing just fascinating. it really make me think, just like the rest of your bio- very clever. your writing seems so informed, thought provoking and well thought out.
80citrus scentedwow this is quite unusual. mainly because theres not much emotion- but then again it is just a butterfly. still some beautiful words and images you lay out here. its very effective the whole: "hello, goodbye," it really captures something discovering the world, espeacilly as it sounds quite innocent.
ps. i just read your bio, and found the stadge of love thing just fascinating. it really make me think, just like the rest of your bio- very clever. your writing seems so informed, thought provoking and well thought out.
10/16/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Very deep, I enjoyed the changing moods here. From fun to philosophically serious. It captures our ever-changing selves. Good job, thnx for sharing.
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionVery deep, I enjoyed the changing moods here. From fun to philosophically serious. It captures our ever-changing selves. Good job, thnx for sharing.