for Without Wings2/6/2006 c1 natasha
very- very cool...again- i loved this one too. you're really good at this! i really liked the ending.
very- very cool...again- i loved this one too. you're really good at this! i really liked the ending.
11/11/2005 c1 Lost Sygnal
Wow, this poem is so beautiful.
"Entangled in believing" is a great line. Very deep =D
Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your work.
~Steve
Wow, this poem is so beautiful.
"Entangled in believing" is a great line. Very deep =D
Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your work.
~Steve
11/7/2005 c1 
11les petits bateaux
I love this poem. I love the string of words that fitted perfectly in this poem and I love the way you used a question to phrase the whole ending. It also makes you think again, for a second, what the whole thing actually meant. Very good job.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxI love this poem. I love the string of words that fitted perfectly in this poem and I love the way you used a question to phrase the whole ending. It also makes you think again, for a second, what the whole thing actually meant. Very good job.
~~Trinity
10/16/2005 c1 3Ang-Dev
This is such an awesome poem! i mean, the rhyming and the flow is really good and altogether u hav a brilliant beginning. btw, welcome to fp and thanx so much for the review! keep writing:-)~ang~
3Ang-DevThis is such an awesome poem! i mean, the rhyming and the flow is really good and altogether u hav a brilliant beginning. btw, welcome to fp and thanx so much for the review! keep writing:-)~ang~
10/14/2005 c1 65Thorn's-girl
"If I loose my heart in freedom
Then who needs wings to fly?"
Excellent line. This had great rythm and flows beautifully.
"Entangled in believing." Georgeous.
65Thorn's-girl"If I loose my heart in freedom
Then who needs wings to fly?"
Excellent line. This had great rythm and flows beautifully.
"Entangled in believing." Georgeous.
10/11/2005 c1 boundtobreak
Heloo there Gummibear:) what a rhyme of stupidity I now know who this is thanks to whits review.But what can I say about this poem it is an awer if that is a word or I just made it up.But I liked this poem KW expect to see more from you guys... when we get our computer hooked up I will have some new stuff(better too) but I miss you guys 'Hang in there sgetti I know your pain:P'But anyways Loved the poem and hope to see more soon Bye Tiffany
Heloo there Gummibear:) what a rhyme of stupidity I now know who this is thanks to whits review.But what can I say about this poem it is an awer if that is a word or I just made it up.But I liked this poem KW expect to see more from you guys... when we get our computer hooked up I will have some new stuff(better too) but I miss you guys 'Hang in there sgetti I know your pain:P'But anyways Loved the poem and hope to see more soon Bye Tiffany
10/10/2005 c1 3gummibared
ha, ha, I'm reviewing myself...Ha, ha, haha, hahaha...oops! my brain fell out *_*
3gummibaredha, ha, I'm reviewing myself...Ha, ha, haha, hahaha...oops! my brain fell out *_*
10/10/2005 c1 63silentscreamer07
YAY! YOU FINALLY HAVE A POEM AND A FP NAME! WOO HOO! hehe..im so excited..can ya tell?
Ne whats...on with thee review..
THIS WAS AWESOME! I loved it, no joke. I absolutely love it when things are compared to wings..i really do..i love it..so that last line was my fav...that last stanza was...
"I i loose my heart in freedom/ Then who needs wings to fly?"
GAH! it was lovely..quitlovely.. ::claps politely:: ...forget that...::stands up and screams "yeah!":: im an odd child, i know. ne wats, awesome poem..*kw* and thnx so much for the reviews!
~George~
63silentscreamer07YAY! YOU FINALLY HAVE A POEM AND A FP NAME! WOO HOO! hehe..im so excited..can ya tell?
Ne whats...on with thee review..
THIS WAS AWESOME! I loved it, no joke. I absolutely love it when things are compared to wings..i really do..i love it..so that last line was my fav...that last stanza was...
"I i loose my heart in freedom/ Then who needs wings to fly?"
GAH! it was lovely..quitlovely.. ::claps politely:: ...forget that...::stands up and screams "yeah!":: im an odd child, i know. ne wats, awesome poem..*kw* and thnx so much for the reviews!
~George~
10/10/2005 c1 40LoveAlways05
Hey Hayley! i really thought this poem was cute! keep up the good work. Sorry that Alice is following you,my deepest sorrow for you
40LoveAlways05Hey Hayley! i really thought this poem was cute! keep up the good work. Sorry that Alice is following you,my deepest sorrow for you
10/10/2005 c1 8forgottenmoon831
Wow, this was beautiful! It flowed so well and i love your theme here; thanks for the great read!
8forgottenmoon831Wow, this was beautiful! It flowed so well and i love your theme here; thanks for the great read!