for Distopia10/24/2006 c1 
75clockwork kiss
that was awesome! the villanelle style worked perfect for you- i didn't get sick of the repetition but was rather excited to see how you would next spin. i absolutely LOVELOVELOVE the last stanza. that's a whole lotta genius. the che thing also came through really nicely for you. kudos!
75clockwork kissthat was awesome! the villanelle style worked perfect for you- i didn't get sick of the repetition but was rather excited to see how you would next spin. i absolutely LOVELOVELOVE the last stanza. that's a whole lotta genius. the che thing also came through really nicely for you. kudos!
10/24/2005 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
Lucy-that is so brilliant. Apparently, your gift for writing stretches further than just fiction. And you know me, I'm not good at giving constructive criticism outside grammar, so that's about all I can think to say.NOW...why was I not informed that you'd posted things on fictionpress? I'm in no way asking to beta everything you write; that would be selfish. But it would have been nice to know...and are you going to send me the last chapter of Wingbroken? Ever? Ehh...I suppose I should email you with this sort of thing. But I figure, I'm reviewing; why not include this?~Molly
55APersonAndAHalfLucy-that is so brilliant. Apparently, your gift for writing stretches further than just fiction. And you know me, I'm not good at giving constructive criticism outside grammar, so that's about all I can think to say.NOW...why was I not informed that you'd posted things on fictionpress? I'm in no way asking to beta everything you write; that would be selfish. But it would have been nice to know...and are you going to send me the last chapter of Wingbroken? Ever? Ehh...I suppose I should email you with this sort of thing. But I figure, I'm reviewing; why not include this?~Molly
10/21/2005 c1 32Abortive Measures
That is something incredible. The Guevara thing pisses me off too, the rebel sell and all that, but what can you do? Anyway just keep writing.
32Abortive MeasuresThat is something incredible. The Guevara thing pisses me off too, the rebel sell and all that, but what can you do? Anyway just keep writing.
10/11/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I loved the detail of this; such a powerful piece, I really applaud you for its uniquness. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI loved the detail of this; such a powerful piece, I really applaud you for its uniquness. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.