for louis11/22/2009 c1 
1kez9373
i really liked this. had to read it a few times over but was really interested in how it made me smile. lets just say a personal experience rings to mind... :)
1kez9373i really liked this. had to read it a few times over but was really interested in how it made me smile. lets just say a personal experience rings to mind... :)
2/18/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
This is weird, but I like it. I especially like the second line. It's so random, but that's what makes it awesome. I love specific poems. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesThis is weird, but I like it. I especially like the second line. It's so random, but that's what makes it awesome. I love specific poems. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
10/27/2005 c1 6Gilee7
This one is interesting.
-and the swirl of her belly button unravelled on the seams.- That's quite odd, but I really like it. Very cool.
And I really like the use of parenthesis in line four. Quite clever. This is a good poem. Not great or anything, but good. I liked it. Nice ending line, too.
6Gilee7This one is interesting.
-and the swirl of her belly button unravelled on the seams.- That's quite odd, but I really like it. Very cool.
And I really like the use of parenthesis in line four. Quite clever. This is a good poem. Not great or anything, but good. I liked it. Nice ending line, too.
10/21/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
interesting...i like it a lot, but i might change the rating
(ps. if you have the time could you tell me which of my poems you like best.. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!)
612simpleplan13interesting...i like it a lot, but i might change the rating
(ps. if you have the time could you tell me which of my poems you like best.. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!)
10/16/2005 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Very nice poem, never really reviewed a poem like this before. This is great, though, really liked the message you put in here. Great work, keep it up!
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.XVery nice poem, never really reviewed a poem like this before. This is great, though, really liked the message you put in here. Great work, keep it up!
10/15/2005 c1 Eboniccinderella
That was god.I don't know why,but it made me think of a young girl brought into the prostituting business and no longer desiring to be apart of it.
That was god.I don't know why,but it made me think of a young girl brought into the prostituting business and no longer desiring to be apart of it.
10/14/2005 c1 117xHannahx
...but however hot they look, theyre still bastards (im in that stage of breakup, sorry) this is really descriptive, i really like it. thanks for the review,
Han
117xHannahx...but however hot they look, theyre still bastards (im in that stage of breakup, sorry) this is really descriptive, i really like it. thanks for the review,
Han
10/12/2005 c1 80citrus scented
oh god another fantastic piece. "the swirl of her belly button unravelled " beautiful, its like a painting this one..the two seem to be blended into each other, well her into him...and yet the ending line makes you think. nice one.
80citrus scentedoh god another fantastic piece. "the swirl of her belly button unravelled " beautiful, its like a painting this one..the two seem to be blended into each other, well her into him...and yet the ending line makes you think. nice one.