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10/13/2005 c1 ZePuKa
heya, kae-chan! i already read this at school! and yes, i loved it! i dunno why, but I REALLY like the 'away, ayon, aside me now' part... but yeah, once again, you have proven that you will one day move on to become a bestselling author, and I can only hope that you will grace me with an autograph.. in silver sharpie... with a star next to it... =D anyways, I've got to go to lunch... I shall see you sunday!puka
10/12/2005 c1 maxnotevoltage
Man! You should post more poetry on here! - J.max
10/12/2005 c1 hey maria
Wow. You sure you're not a poet? This is marvelous. You're wonderful at using repetition, not too much of it, and very subtle. I love the shifting point-of-views. Great job, and keep writing.
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