for The Frog Prince3/13/2006 c1 
57TheJusticeKeeper
wickedly awesome... thankyou for reading my song, cant remember the title...but yeah. my user name is kario...if u like you can read others...thanks again.
57TheJusticeKeeperwickedly awesome... thankyou for reading my song, cant remember the title...but yeah. my user name is kario...if u like you can read others...thanks again.
12/4/2005 c2 8dearestmelody
Ahh~~! I can't believe you left it at that! Meanie! -_-
You really are a old hag now that you turned 16! lol
Anyway, it was really good, but the first part, before the damn guy came, was sort of boring...And what does the stupid golden ball have to do anything with the story? I mean, the bad guys were talking about it and all...
Let me guess? The boy is a frog. ...Great. But he better be a hot frog! (though I can't even imagine how a frog can be hot...they are ug-ly!)
Anyway, you better update soon!
8dearestmelodyAhh~~! I can't believe you left it at that! Meanie! -_-
You really are a old hag now that you turned 16! lol
Anyway, it was really good, but the first part, before the damn guy came, was sort of boring...And what does the stupid golden ball have to do anything with the story? I mean, the bad guys were talking about it and all...
Let me guess? The boy is a frog. ...Great. But he better be a hot frog! (though I can't even imagine how a frog can be hot...they are ug-ly!)
Anyway, you better update soon!
11/22/2005 c2 takaa
its soo shoujo! u outdid ureself!*(throws confetti over tatsuki)*wahaha at first i ws a little bored but when u got to that part abt that absolutely gorgeous guy ( he sounded gorgeous,but if he's not, so help me, for i shall kill you)i aws like omgsh he sounds so cool..hehehe and his eyes..kakoi! great description! i really cannot believe how well you can write!ure best fren,takaatakaatakaa
its soo shoujo! u outdid ureself!*(throws confetti over tatsuki)*wahaha at first i ws a little bored but when u got to that part abt that absolutely gorgeous guy ( he sounded gorgeous,but if he's not, so help me, for i shall kill you)i aws like omgsh he sounds so cool..hehehe and his eyes..kakoi! great description! i really cannot believe how well you can write!ure best fren,takaatakaatakaa
11/21/2005 c2 55ronshaberry
Ooh, very nice and dramatic now. Hey is the boy cute? XD Hehe... uh... So basically the Wolfe clan is evil and the girl's going to fall in love with the guy? EHEHEHE sorry. I'm weird. Anyway, like I said. This would make a great storyline for a manga. ^_^x
55ronshaberryOoh, very nice and dramatic now. Hey is the boy cute? XD Hehe... uh... So basically the Wolfe clan is evil and the girl's going to fall in love with the guy? EHEHEHE sorry. I'm weird. Anyway, like I said. This would make a great storyline for a manga. ^_^x
11/21/2005 c2 13Daughter-of-Louis
o no one dares defy the red string! I drew a comic on jellycreations.com about the red string of fate-its called no strings attached ha its old and sucky :p anyway getting to things that count-I really realy like this story! I hope you update soon i'm realling liking the way its going and I will DEFINATELY be keeping an eye on it i assure you :D Keep up the superb work! can't wat to see what happens!
Tara
13Daughter-of-Louiso no one dares defy the red string! I drew a comic on jellycreations.com about the red string of fate-its called no strings attached ha its old and sucky :p anyway getting to things that count-I really realy like this story! I hope you update soon i'm realling liking the way its going and I will DEFINATELY be keeping an eye on it i assure you :D Keep up the superb work! can't wat to see what happens!
Tara
10/25/2005 c1 8dearestmelody
Great beginning! A bit short...actually, a LOT short...but good noneless. The plot is obvious, but I LOVE obvious story ideas! ^_^
Send me the manga! And I know you will. You know my email...I hope. -_-
Anyway, WRITE MORE! THIS IS DEFINITLEY A LATE BIRTHDAY PRESENT!
AND SEND ME MY EMAILS! I NEED TO MAKE YOUR PRESENT TOO! .
8dearestmelodyGreat beginning! A bit short...actually, a LOT short...but good noneless. The plot is obvious, but I LOVE obvious story ideas! ^_^
Send me the manga! And I know you will. You know my email...I hope. -_-
Anyway, WRITE MORE! THIS IS DEFINITLEY A LATE BIRTHDAY PRESENT!
AND SEND ME MY EMAILS! I NEED TO MAKE YOUR PRESENT TOO! .
10/13/2005 c1 55ronshaberry
Ah~ I'd love to see this as a manga, this is the type of storyline that needs graphics... in my opinion. I'd love to see the first page, etc. Could you send it to me, please? I mean, if you've scanned it.
55ronshaberryAh~ I'd love to see this as a manga, this is the type of storyline that needs graphics... in my opinion. I'd love to see the first page, etc. Could you send it to me, please? I mean, if you've scanned it.
10/13/2005 c1 2Watashi no Himitsu Ai
Wow! It sounds very interesting! I can't wait until more chapters come!
-Takahashi Michiko
2Watashi no Himitsu AiWow! It sounds very interesting! I can't wait until more chapters come!
-Takahashi Michiko
10/13/2005 c1 13Daughter-of-Louis
Very nice. A few errors but all in all good job for your first original story! Congrats! I look forward to seeing what happens. I would love to see the first page and character sketches! My email is . Hope to see a new chapter up soon. it seems like it could be an interesting story.
Tara
13Daughter-of-LouisVery nice. A few errors but all in all good job for your first original story! Congrats! I look forward to seeing what happens. I would love to see the first page and character sketches! My email is . Hope to see a new chapter up soon. it seems like it could be an interesting story.
Tara