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12/16/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Piercing imagery, splendid.
11/8/2005 c1 32Mike James Watson
i liked this... i'm not a huge fan of the splitting of the thoughts into 2 lines, but i'd assume you had reasons, either stylized or otherwise. the content was interesting to say the least, bravo.
10/14/2005 c1 43lronMaiden
very creepy and nightmarish - but i love it all the more for that! Amazing imagery and mood, i really love this piece. You've managed to use excellent words without sounding corny and cliched. I'm sure this could be interpreted in many different ways. Hats off to you!
10/13/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
Dali was a fascist- but I love him.The imagery is wonderful (and obviously surrealist, and beatifully vulgar just as dali's was.)

I loved the lines "You've branded you canvas With women and genitals, Infants and tables, With clean cut incisions You've carved out their middles,"it was raw and terribly- and perfect.

The last stanza just didn't have that certain something that that rest seemed to- the first four lines seemed especially off.

Other than that, lovely.

-simpleton

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