for Amortentia vs Veritaserum7/8/2006 c1 
123Black and White Dreams
Beautiful. This is just so... amazing. It nearly had me in tears. It flows beautifully and I love the rhyme.
p.s.
HP fan? Same here! =P
*::~Cat~::*
123Black and White DreamsBeautiful. This is just so... amazing. It nearly had me in tears. It flows beautifully and I love the rhyme.
p.s.
HP fan? Same here! =P
*::~Cat~::*
10/14/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
Sweet, if not entirely remarkable. The metre was off in the last line, but I guess it works if you read a half-beat early.
I actually really liked the title (hp? never thought someone would be inspired by that to write love/angst poetry. Meh. Anyways,
keep at it.
-simpleton
Sweet, if not entirely remarkable. The metre was off in the last line, but I guess it works if you read a half-beat early.
I actually really liked the title (hp? never thought someone would be inspired by that to write love/angst poetry. Meh. Anyways,
keep at it.
-simpleton