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7/8/2006 c1 123Black and White Dreams
Beautiful. This is just so... amazing. It nearly had me in tears. It flows beautifully and I love the rhyme.


HP fan? Same here! =P

10/14/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
Sweet, if not entirely remarkable. The metre was off in the last line, but I guess it works if you read a half-beat early.

I actually really liked the title (hp? never thought someone would be inspired by that to write love/angst poetry. Meh. Anyways,

keep at it.


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