for one day8/16/2009 c1 
1tonight we bloom
wow. this is extremely beautiful. that first stanza just completely blew me away, i love the first two lines.
and all of your descriptions and the words you used were so perfect, too. i think you really don't need a lot of the bold, italics, and underlines you used, but once again it might just be personal preference, i thought it just took away from your words rather than enforcing them.
a beautiful poem.
1tonight we bloomwow. this is extremely beautiful. that first stanza just completely blew me away, i love the first two lines.
and all of your descriptions and the words you used were so perfect, too. i think you really don't need a lot of the bold, italics, and underlines you used, but once again it might just be personal preference, i thought it just took away from your words rather than enforcing them.
a beautiful poem.
10/23/2005 c1 236mezzie
the way you highlight words makes them pop out so well, and bonus pints for using good words, like prosaic and abysmal, even reprieve - vocabulary makes such a difference in description.
mezzie
236mezziethe way you highlight words makes them pop out so well, and bonus pints for using good words, like prosaic and abysmal, even reprieve - vocabulary makes such a difference in description.
mezzie
10/15/2005 c1 28always gats b y
Oh my. I love the first stanza. I adore the whole "one day i'll swallow the sun & explode into a thousand abysmal stars". I'll have you know I love stars.
;D Drop by my profile sometime.
xo - Rei
PS. Psstt... favorites.
28always gats b yOh my. I love the first stanza. I adore the whole "one day i'll swallow the sun & explode into a thousand abysmal stars". I'll have you know I love stars.
;D Drop by my profile sometime.
xo - Rei
PS. Psstt... favorites.
10/15/2005 c1 waitandhope
Again, wow. I think I'm really starting to enjoy your poetry. I can't describe it, but it's really... good.
Again, wow. I think I'm really starting to enjoy your poetry. I can't describe it, but it's really... good.