for electric, eccentric, elusive12/22/2005 c1 
14J.H. Fitzgerald
I am so impressed with your ability to tell the truth about the way things are in such a simple, lovely way. It's a rare thing on this site, that's for sure. You have your own style of writing, and it's great.
14J.H. FitzgeraldI am so impressed with your ability to tell the truth about the way things are in such a simple, lovely way. It's a rare thing on this site, that's for sure. You have your own style of writing, and it's great.
12/4/2005 c1 24Esther Talman
Beautiful! Your imagery is fantastic! I heart this poem! Awesome writing!
24Esther TalmanBeautiful! Your imagery is fantastic! I heart this poem! Awesome writing!
10/23/2005 c1 236mezzie
you have a great voice to your work and style, the phrasing you use, and knowing when to break a line. I like your interlude-like bits between the verses, they work really well, the variety of emphasis is effective but doesn't feel overcooked. all of it is really good but the last verse is great, especially the easier to reach ending.
mezzie
236mezzieyou have a great voice to your work and style, the phrasing you use, and knowing when to break a line. I like your interlude-like bits between the verses, they work really well, the variety of emphasis is effective but doesn't feel overcooked. all of it is really good but the last verse is great, especially the easier to reach ending.
mezzie