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71ChobiMM3
Cute! Nicely done; are you going to keep it untitled or is that actually the title? JUst wondering...either way, great.
71ChobiMM3Cute! Nicely done; are you going to keep it untitled or is that actually the title? JUst wondering...either way, great.
10/15/2005 c1 35XxVendettxX
I like this, it captures a simple, raw emotion, without being overly wordy. Ill add you to my favorite authors, you have talent and it shows.
35XxVendettxXI like this, it captures a simple, raw emotion, without being overly wordy. Ill add you to my favorite authors, you have talent and it shows.