for A Hopeless Routine4/25/2006 c1 theflowerinyourhair
i LOVE your reference to "razorblade kisses". very nice.P.S. thank you very much for reviewing my poems!
i LOVE your reference to "razorblade kisses". very nice.P.S. thank you very much for reviewing my poems!
11/14/2005 c1 Ife
Very, very depressed, hopeless and hapless. reminds us of the weakness of mind AND body. this is very fleeting. like the emotions i suppose. it gives you such a sense of hollowness; you've really picked out the right words.
luv Ife
Very, very depressed, hopeless and hapless. reminds us of the weakness of mind AND body. this is very fleeting. like the emotions i suppose. it gives you such a sense of hollowness; you've really picked out the right words.
luv Ife
10/16/2005 c1 
18Master Mind4
this is so refreshing to read... so good that it hurts. love the line "Wipe each of my tears away with your razorblade kisses" very nice write
18Master Mind4this is so refreshing to read... so good that it hurts. love the line "Wipe each of my tears away with your razorblade kisses" very nice write