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7/22/2007 c1 495mate.feed.kill.repeat
So few words, but so powerful. You chose excellent words and although it is only three lines, the lines flow well together. Nice writing.

-STIX-
11/9/2006 c1 17Unique1952
Wow...I like it.
1/2/2006 c1 73Jezsh
gentle, sweet and oh-so-pretty...
11/10/2005 c1 67astral boy
Impressive. I got an image of a blue, neon-lit person floating around on the moon. Haha! No idea why... but it was an enjoyable breif thought. :)Not usually a fan of haiku but this was just so perfect. Well done.
10/26/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
very cute.. I love that last line
10/24/2005 c1 12364 unbirthdays
lovely. short/sweet, yet at the same time, emotion is hidden behind it. *luv it
10/23/2005 c1 64not sure yet
im sure people already stinted you on your grammer so ill just leave it, pretty poem though, really like the first line, seemed so bright and open, nicely done
10/22/2005 c1 6McQuinn
"You're" should be "your."

Other than that, it's beautiful.
10/17/2005 c1 65Aquafied
or two?

naked silence, reminds me of moss, streaking through a forest.

spoiling the breaty of it, or telling it you are just as natural too.

oo. nudists.
10/17/2005 c1 59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
hehe...very short but sweet...well done^_^
10/17/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
aww, that sounds so cute! ^_^ love the last line.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
10/17/2005 c1 63lackluster
i love the feeling in it. it's such beautiful innocence. or maybe just beauty.
10/16/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
Geez would you two just get a room! lol, I'm just messing aroud. It is cool!
10/16/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
Wow.the last line made me gasp.Gorgeous haiku.
10/16/2005 c1 43lronMaiden
very sweet and innocent. Love it.
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