for Yeah10/17/2005 c1 
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Wow, this is a great poem. Every line made me want to read more. Awesomeness!
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.XWow, this is a great poem. Every line made me want to read more. Awesomeness!
10/16/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Loved it! The acrostic was original and caught my eye right away. The poem wrapped itself around the words as they formed the final conclusion.
Seems that everytime something beautiful comes along it gets torn into dust... nothing more than a memory stuck on the heel of a shoe.
Very good piece. Nice flow... it was original... I hate cliches, though I know we are all prone to them. bravo to you!
Write on!
24Sarah-BrighteyesLoved it! The acrostic was original and caught my eye right away. The poem wrapped itself around the words as they formed the final conclusion.
Seems that everytime something beautiful comes along it gets torn into dust... nothing more than a memory stuck on the heel of a shoe.
Very good piece. Nice flow... it was original... I hate cliches, though I know we are all prone to them. bravo to you!
Write on!