for october rain2/1/2006 c1 nofaceme
this is so poignant and well said! I love your writting style, it's unique and well written. You use wonderful imagry and word choice! keep it up!
this is so poignant and well said! I love your writting style, it's unique and well written. You use wonderful imagry and word choice! keep it up!
11/1/2005 c1 
64not sure yet
"but you sold off your integrity/for a moment of glitter & fever" i muchly love this, it's so beautiful in a dirty sort of way in some parts even, excellent excellent excellent job
64not sure yet"but you sold off your integrity/for a moment of glitter & fever" i muchly love this, it's so beautiful in a dirty sort of way in some parts even, excellent excellent excellent job
10/17/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
I love it.
this is simply the most beautiful thing crafted today. it just ... my god, I am speechless.
~* noelle
90poetic abortionI love it.
this is simply the most beautiful thing crafted today. it just ... my god, I am speechless.
~* noelle
10/17/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
Oh, this is just heartbreaking. I love your writing.
These were my favorite lines: "hollowed out by addiction & obsession,/you gaze sadly at the pained/paned glass" "(we could almost touch the sky)/beneath a sea of unlucky clovers & slated train tracks/(we didn’t know what we were doing/we didn’t know how free we were –)" "but you sold off your integrity/for a moment of glitter & fever/(it looked just like the real thing, you swear)".
You're just too good :). I love this.
58White Tea and GingerOh, this is just heartbreaking. I love your writing.
These were my favorite lines: "hollowed out by addiction & obsession,/you gaze sadly at the pained/paned glass" "(we could almost touch the sky)/beneath a sea of unlucky clovers & slated train tracks/(we didn’t know what we were doing/we didn’t know how free we were –)" "but you sold off your integrity/for a moment of glitter & fever/(it looked just like the real thing, you swear)".
You're just too good :). I love this.
10/17/2005 c1 63lackluster
"a moment of glitter & fever" it seems centered around that theme. to tell you the truth, that fascinates me more than the aftermath, but then again, the whole point is that it doesn't last forever. sadly.
63lackluster"a moment of glitter & fever" it seems centered around that theme. to tell you the truth, that fascinates me more than the aftermath, but then again, the whole point is that it doesn't last forever. sadly.
10/17/2005 c1 sunday night sky
beautiful, great imagery
beautiful, great imagery