for Die My Demon Lover5/22/2006 c1 lost-soul-lost-wanderer
it's really deep, n has a lot of hate in it, embrace the poem! lolz iono =P wow i juz totally killed it, but it's gud, keep up the gud work ^-^
it's really deep, n has a lot of hate in it, embrace the poem! lolz iono =P wow i juz totally killed it, but it's gud, keep up the gud work ^-^
11/14/2005 c1 Isi Franssoiz Elyan
A fantastic clash of emotions. the language just suits this really well. the lines are well formatted too, i like the contrast of long and short lines. this is a powerful poem.
luv Ife
ps- watch out for typos
A fantastic clash of emotions. the language just suits this really well. the lines are well formatted too, i like the contrast of long and short lines. this is a powerful poem.
luv Ife
ps- watch out for typos
11/2/2005 c1 
3ThamesRelic
Extremely emotional. Try not to use cuss words in poetry because it ruins the mood even if thats how strong you are feeling. Good job chap.
3ThamesRelicExtremely emotional. Try not to use cuss words in poetry because it ruins the mood even if thats how strong you are feeling. Good job chap.
10/18/2005 c1 7Black Rose Angel
Wow- good emotions in it- ya can see the anger. Nice job!
~BlackRoseAngel~
7Black Rose AngelWow- good emotions in it- ya can see the anger. Nice job!
~BlackRoseAngel~