10/26/2005 c3 34RhythmOfMySoul
It's good so far. I haven't read enough to give you a REALLY good review. You've caught and held my interest though, continue.

P.S. leaving these "non-chapters" isn't good. It's against the rules and whatnot. Just edit your chapter (or replace it) and add it to the bottom of the chapter. beleive me, you don't want to be penalized for something like that.

10/24/2005 c2 2DarkAngelOfFire
Wonderful story..Can't wait to see how Annie and Robbie's relationship develops..Great start...Post the next chapter soon, I'm anxiousDon't worry about people reviewing, you should write for yourself, not for other people.. You're just doing the other people reading a favor by putting it on fictionpress..You're a great writer!

10/23/2005 c3 16Tree Climber
1) I like the characters, setting, plot, etc. so far. Just try to keep them from getting cliche.2) The grammar isn't terribly good. I've seen worse, but you should go back and clean it up.3) it's bad manners to beg for reviews.

Happy writing!Jules