7/16/2008 c19 13blurrylights
I absolutely loved this story too- I cried so much! The last book was happier, but it portrayed a lot of emotion very clearly. This one dealt with harsher issues, but the emotion still came out clearly and it was a very powerful "book". I think this story took 2 and a half hours- you did an awesome job! I am absolutely looking forward to reading your other stories.

I loved that Ral and Ryan got back together- that was nice. I still don't like Noelle that much, but I guess she and Logan make a good pair. Poor Neil...no one yet. I think Math and Livy make an excellent couple- Math is adorable! Alec and Max are of course, heroes in my heart. I felt really bad for Ral in the middle when Ryan broke up and everyone was mad at her- she definitely did go over the top, but she had a justified reason. I'm glad Logan did his part to get them together. See- I'm writing about them as if they were actually real! That's how good you are.

All in all, if your story was a person, I would probably marry him. Great job!

7/14/2008 c19 reader
"Draining, intense"

You are so absolutely right. It's so intense just reading it, I can't imagine how intense it would be to compose this.

I kind of felt the Livy-Math vibe before, actually in the previous story/novel, so that was a nice finishing touch. I'm extremely glad you paired Noelle with Logan. It was as perfect of a match as you could have made. They were great together.

Thanks so much again for sharing this.

I am so in awe of your skill.

7/13/2008 c16 reader
I read a lot of romance stuff (kind of like Math) online. Usually they're pretty superficial, but they do the trick.

I really like this story because you've really, really made the characters come alive for me. The emotions are almost tangible to me. I can empathize with them. You have this incredible talent. I don't know how you do it, but I really admire you for it, and I appreciate that you're sharing all this hard work online.

7/13/2008 c11 reader
I actually almost cried in this chapter for Logan.

7/9/2008 c9 dramaqueen1308
People have been saying that Noelles a real bitch and that they hate her. I, on the otherhand, love her. She may be a bitch but I think that some of the things that she says, her sense of humour and the way she deals with things are absolutely fantastic. On the other hand, even in AAO I hated Raleigh. She pisses me off something spectacular. But anyways. I think Noelles awesome and Raleigh sucks. And also your a great writer. Theres nothing excess and I love it. Thanks very much! :D

6/26/2008 c16 sew.what32
finally!

they talk about what is on their minds and get everything out in the open!

awesome chapter!

6/26/2008 c14 sew.what32
yay! noelle stays at logans side!