for Hey, Superman4/29/2006 c2 elizabeth73
Great story! I love that you took the approach of showing both Jessie and Cameron's view of the night. One question, Who is Mike? Is he just a good friend of both of them? Is he Jessie's brother and Cameron's friend? I'll go back and read it again because I might have missed it. I am anxious to read more of what happened between Jessie and Cameron and what Jessie didn't tell him. Again, great story. You are a very talented writer and I am enjoying this story.
Great story! I love that you took the approach of showing both Jessie and Cameron's view of the night. One question, Who is Mike? Is he just a good friend of both of them? Is he Jessie's brother and Cameron's friend? I'll go back and read it again because I might have missed it. I am anxious to read more of what happened between Jessie and Cameron and what Jessie didn't tell him. Again, great story. You are a very talented writer and I am enjoying this story.
4/29/2006 c1 Emilea
hey. i thought i'd review this chapter as well because you have just started this story and there aren't a lot of reviews yet. I'm wondering about the superman thing.
babe anjwl.x
hey. i thought i'd review this chapter as well because you have just started this story and there aren't a lot of reviews yet. I'm wondering about the superman thing.
babe anjwl.x
4/29/2006 c2 Emilea
this is very very very interesting. i cant wait to read more so i do hope you will continue. =]
this is very well-written anyways and cameron sounds so MYSTERIOUS. =P
babe anjwl.x
update soon please!
this is very very very interesting. i cant wait to read more so i do hope you will continue. =]
this is very well-written anyways and cameron sounds so MYSTERIOUS. =P
babe anjwl.x
update soon please!
10/21/2005 c1 
5chellziez
Oh who's the mysterious woman then? Lol can't wait to see your next chapter!
5chellziezOh who's the mysterious woman then? Lol can't wait to see your next chapter!
10/18/2005 c1 AJ
I really like your story its really good!
I really like your story its really good!
10/18/2005 c1 Claire-a-bell
Hey, killer ending. It really leaves you curious. Damn cliffhangers. I'm loving the looks of this story and I'll keep my eye out for an update.
Hey, killer ending. It really leaves you curious. Damn cliffhangers. I'm loving the looks of this story and I'll keep my eye out for an update.