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8/29/2009 c1 6Breezzy
I really enjoyed this poem, and I really empathised with the descrciption

"The girl behind the smiles,

The petal dangling just."

It exudes vunerability, and something in the tone or the wording of this really hit home, I understand these emotions completely.
6/4/2007 c1 4OneMoreMiracle
I realy like this. I have felt this way at times...
3/13/2007 c1 angelgrl
another powerful one. love the part with the flower and the dangling petal
12/29/2006 c1 muddled mind
This relates to so many people. I feel like this sometimes too so it's kind of depressing for me to read actually. Keep up writing.
3/7/2006 c1 9facadesX
i really liked this. it relates a lot to what i feel sometimes.

update more! (:
2/16/2006 c1 6Death by Dangerous Driving
Totally relate to it. So yeah. Good work. UPDATE FOREVER YOU DAMMIT!
10/20/2005 c1 6summers-end
Did you write this? Wow. It's really good. I love the second-to-last verse.

I wish you'd given a little more information on this new story. But since you didn't...make sure to update soon!

summers-end(formerly known as basicME)
10/19/2005 c1 22Dark Child
i love this. a petal dangling just. the as if part, while not exactly poetic is kinda touching in a reminiscent 'clueless' way too. =P i heart this
10/19/2005 c1 1Rawkin-it
it was great I loved the word choice and the repetition of tired. makes everything seem so worn out that your at the brink of nothingness. and you just begging and sick of being so lost... good job! thaks for the review on my poem too!
10/18/2005 c1 xiaobudian
really sad poem. Loved it! ^^
10/18/2005 c1 2ooies
Great wording, I especially loved where you said "A petal dangling just." Its odd but, idk ... but I really like it =) hope you write more

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