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10/25/2005 c1 3Typewriter Koinonia
I'm Fake Raptor!
10/19/2005 c1 21foodisgood
Beautiful.
10/18/2005 c1 50Chandra-Moon
Your last line is very good. The first two, however, make it seem a bit childish... "suck" and "moron". Maybe that was your point, but it just seems like so much better descriptions could have preceded "eggshell house", which is beautiful.

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