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for Killing Me Slowly

10/18/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
slightly repetitive~ but still ok~ the meaning and emotion was there^^ good work

keep writing!
10/18/2005 c1 145BellonaFlayreRiver
i like how you seem to just surrender in the last stanza. not really good in real life, but it had a good, powerful effect on the reader (me). it was kind of like a slap in the face to wake up and help. lovely.

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