10/18/2005 c1132mizu no kokoro slightly repetitive~ but still ok~ the meaning and emotion was there^^ good work
10/18/2005 c1145BellonaFlayreRiver i like how you seem to just surrender in the last stanza. not really good in real life, but it had a good, powerful effect on the reader (me). it was kind of like a slap in the face to wake up and help. lovely.