10/20/2005 c1 Julius Gillian
A good piece of work, I see you didn't have to rhyme in order to achieve a balance in your poem. It's ironic somewhat, I write rhyming poems but I prefer poems like these without rhymes.

Anyway I like this. Good work.

- ShadowEver

10/19/2005 c1 51Arichos
Damn, where've you been? Anyway, good comeback. It paints an awesome picture, and even deeper concept. Awesome...