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5/4/2006 c1 4DarkWolf-X3
Very Nicely written, sounds like me to a point...Keep it up.
10/20/2005 c1 Julius Gillian
A good piece of work, I see you didn't have to rhyme in order to achieve a balance in your poem. It's ironic somewhat, I write rhyming poems but I prefer poems like these without rhymes.

Anyway I like this. Good work.

- ShadowEver
10/19/2005 c1 8Bottled
Love it. Good descriptions. Good metaphors.
10/19/2005 c1 51Arichos
Damn, where've you been? Anyway, good comeback. It paints an awesome picture, and even deeper concept. Awesome...
10/18/2005 c1 20Sophii
hey i lov this poem! i can relate to that a lot.

sophii

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