10/19/2005 c1 19tears-of-innocence
Wow...wow... that was so deep and I love it. I think I can kinda relate to that feeling... obviously not in the same way. I really loved the way you wrote this. Except in the third last line I think the 'you' should be 'your'. I love the bit about the mask slowly disintegrating. This was really great. Feel free to check out my stuff.
Wow...wow... that was so deep and I love it. I think I can kinda relate to that feeling... obviously not in the same way. I really loved the way you wrote this. Except in the third last line I think the 'you' should be 'your'. I love the bit about the mask slowly disintegrating. This was really great. Feel free to check out my stuff.