for Wicked and Pure5/21/2006 c4 
3Sillygoose49
Hey!
Please update this soon, as this one is my favorite. I think I've reviewed everything now, and I can't wait to read more. Anyhoo, once again, update soon!
Sillygoose49
3Sillygoose49Hey!
Please update this soon, as this one is my favorite. I think I've reviewed everything now, and I can't wait to read more. Anyhoo, once again, update soon!
Sillygoose49
5/21/2006 c3 Sillygoose49
Hey!
No, the chapter wasn't choppy, it flowed nicely. I liked how you use languages to add to your story (like the Celtic). Anyhoo, I think I have another chapter to read.
Sillygoose49
Hey!
No, the chapter wasn't choppy, it flowed nicely. I liked how you use languages to add to your story (like the Celtic). Anyhoo, I think I have another chapter to read.
Sillygoose49
10/25/2005 c3 MoriMorte
i really enjoy your story
plz update soon and consider me a permanent reader and reviewer.
i wish u luck on ur writing
i really enjoy your story
plz update soon and consider me a permanent reader and reviewer.
i wish u luck on ur writing
10/22/2005 c2 Anime Freakizoid
hey girl, great update! i'm not sure about the whole bath scene but good chapter! the characters are alive in thier own way and amaze me! hope to hear from you soon, can't wait to read more of Wicked and Pure-anime freakizoid X^_^X
hey girl, great update! i'm not sure about the whole bath scene but good chapter! the characters are alive in thier own way and amaze me! hope to hear from you soon, can't wait to read more of Wicked and Pure-anime freakizoid X^_^X
10/22/2005 c2 1WeaponsOfMassDestruction7
hey, great story so far! i really like Kilahya's character the best, she seems like a really interesting person. I really like the direction in which this story's going, i'll be waiting for an update!
1WeaponsOfMassDestruction7hey, great story so far! i really like Kilahya's character the best, she seems like a really interesting person. I really like the direction in which this story's going, i'll be waiting for an update!
10/20/2005 c1 3Sillygoose49
I am so glad to see that you are writing again, I have missed reading your stories. This is a very promising beginning, and you have most certainly tweeked my interest. Great work, and please update soon!
Sillygoose
PS: I've update the sequel for Mikona, if you would like to check it out!
3Sillygoose49I am so glad to see that you are writing again, I have missed reading your stories. This is a very promising beginning, and you have most certainly tweeked my interest. Great work, and please update soon!
Sillygoose
PS: I've update the sequel for Mikona, if you would like to check it out!
10/20/2005 c1 Anime Freakizoid
hey girl, whaz up? great story, glad you're inspiration is back! ^_^ can't wait for the next update, great job once again!-anime freakizoid X^_^X
hey girl, whaz up? great story, glad you're inspiration is back! ^_^ can't wait for the next update, great job once again!-anime freakizoid X^_^X
10/19/2005 c1 Kaidalyn
I really like this. It's original as far as I've read. I don't know if you're French or not, but J'aime votre conte.
I really like this. It's original as far as I've read. I don't know if you're French or not, but J'aime votre conte.
10/19/2005 c1 60dollface and her cancer
Not a bad start; I like the voice you're developing here. My one suggestions are that 1) you take a more active voice, and 2) (on a related note) that a little adverb goes a long way. Sometimes leaving out the "ly" word will make your work more powerful.
60dollface and her cancerNot a bad start; I like the voice you're developing here. My one suggestions are that 1) you take a more active voice, and 2) (on a related note) that a little adverb goes a long way. Sometimes leaving out the "ly" word will make your work more powerful.