for Bury My Heart For Love and Pride6/7/2006 c1 
1Mr. Magic
this is the third time u hav posted this story! it is majorly against he rules! u cant keep posting the same story until u get good reviews! u r supposed to fix the story u hav already posted! i got ur review by the way. i just wanted u to know that u encouraged me to write so that i can make ur eyes bleed more. u should read some more reviews from my review site. people r responding to u. i know how much u crave attention so i thought u should know. i read what u wrote to beef lips. it was so mean! y r u such an asshole?
Mr. Magic
1Mr. Magicthis is the third time u hav posted this story! it is majorly against he rules! u cant keep posting the same story until u get good reviews! u r supposed to fix the story u hav already posted! i got ur review by the way. i just wanted u to know that u encouraged me to write so that i can make ur eyes bleed more. u should read some more reviews from my review site. people r responding to u. i know how much u crave attention so i thought u should know. i read what u wrote to beef lips. it was so mean! y r u such an asshole?
Mr. Magic
1/25/2006 c1 3Roses of the Moon
i really like this story, but with all the mistakes it was a little hard to read, not bad though. i love the plot, and the way you explain things. but you should make the second chapter into a separate chapter so it's easier to read. if you want help with your editing (if you decide to do it, that is) i'm willing to help, just send me an e-mail if you are. ;Doh, and by the way, welcome to my favourite story/author lists
3Roses of the Mooni really like this story, but with all the mistakes it was a little hard to read, not bad though. i love the plot, and the way you explain things. but you should make the second chapter into a separate chapter so it's easier to read. if you want help with your editing (if you decide to do it, that is) i'm willing to help, just send me an e-mail if you are. ;Doh, and by the way, welcome to my favourite story/author lists
10/20/2005 c1 xdancedestinyxox
Great story! Very well written! I will be lookign for more of these great stories! (and certainly the next chapte rof this one! :D)
Great story! Very well written! I will be lookign for more of these great stories! (and certainly the next chapte rof this one! :D)