for Enduring Summer7/28/2006 c1 
270dustytiger
love it! i really like how you write, it's different from a lot of ppl on here, it stands out, keep up the good work, as always thanx for sharing, and the review
270dustytigerlove it! i really like how you write, it's different from a lot of ppl on here, it stands out, keep up the good work, as always thanx for sharing, and the review
7/25/2006 c1 Safira
A beautiful piece composed of vivid imagery and undertones of whimsicality. Loved the ending line, envoking a great contrast of light and darkness.
Autumn.
A beautiful piece composed of vivid imagery and undertones of whimsicality. Loved the ending line, envoking a great contrast of light and darkness.
Autumn.
7/19/2006 c1 170MallowsWins
Format is interesting. I like the rhyme at the end, it really made this poem come alive.
170MallowsWinsFormat is interesting. I like the rhyme at the end, it really made this poem come alive.
7/14/2006 c1 33lostfish
I'll have to admit, I don't understand this. But sometimes poetry isn't meant to be understood, just appreciated. So I want you to know that I appreciate your talent for stringing together words to make them sound rhythmic. There's just something about this poem- is there a formal structure for it?
Any who, its very nice. I like it.
33lostfishI'll have to admit, I don't understand this. But sometimes poetry isn't meant to be understood, just appreciated. So I want you to know that I appreciate your talent for stringing together words to make them sound rhythmic. There's just something about this poem- is there a formal structure for it?
Any who, its very nice. I like it.
7/14/2006 c1 13Saint Mo Kai
Wow...this could have many meanings for me...it's very mysterious and leaves a lot to the imagination (a good thing in my opinion).
In response to your review for my poem (Die Faster), I'm currently praying and thinking deeply about my feelings towards my father. Having lost my mother a few years ago, I have learned not to take parents for granted. It's hard to work around my anger at the moment, and that poem was written literally just an hour after I found out what happened.
Sorry, this has turned more into a reply than a review...seriously though, this is a beautiful piece of work, you have a unique style which would be every author's pride and joy.
13Saint Mo KaiWow...this could have many meanings for me...it's very mysterious and leaves a lot to the imagination (a good thing in my opinion).
In response to your review for my poem (Die Faster), I'm currently praying and thinking deeply about my feelings towards my father. Having lost my mother a few years ago, I have learned not to take parents for granted. It's hard to work around my anger at the moment, and that poem was written literally just an hour after I found out what happened.
Sorry, this has turned more into a reply than a review...seriously though, this is a beautiful piece of work, you have a unique style which would be every author's pride and joy.
4/4/2006 c1 29Penelope June
It's an awesome poem... most people can pull off a hint of happiness in their poetry, but you did it (or at least i took it that way) quite nicely
great job!
29Penelope JuneIt's an awesome poem... most people can pull off a hint of happiness in their poetry, but you did it (or at least i took it that way) quite nicely
great job!